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Christmas is a day of of love and fun
Childrens having fun and snowmans are built
Candys pilling up into a christmas tree
Ovens are busy with the yummy food!
All childrens are waiting for Christmas Eve to open the
PRESENTS OF COURSE!!!
- by Sumiko_Chan07 |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/07/2008 |
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- Title: Christmas
- Artist: Sumiko_Chan07
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Description:
Merry Christmas Everyone!!!
This poem is about christmas and this poem is made out of some metaphors. Hope you like it! - Date: 12/07/2008
- Tags: christmas
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Comments (6 Comments)
- XoX_Dreamless_XoX - 09/09/2010
- Well.It's kinda nice.But you should've improved better.If you ryhmed them and added some more words.It would be just perfect.3/5.I hope you write better poems next time!
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- EmiKo_KajuJi04 - 12/02/2009
- well, its okay..nt too bad... but u could have improved. one thing, it didnt rhyme much, so... 3/5. hope u can improve better n write more stanzas!!
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- Darkness0514 - 12/21/2008
- cool
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- Mitsuki _ Koyama09 - 12/21/2008
- very good
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- AZN Broy7 - 12/21/2008
- one of the best in my opinion 5/5
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