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Snow falling
So softly
The cold wind blowing against my face
Eeire tunes
And fridgid nights
Blight of the trees
With their branches glistening white
In the dark sky
Not making a sound
Fluffy white flakes
Fall to the frozen ground
The shining ice
Reflects the little light
That is breaking through the dark clouds
It rests on
Drooping nival grass
And the icicles that look like glass
The beauty of it all suddenly hits me
As I gaze out across the land
Everything is coated in white sparkling snow
Could it ever seem more like Christmas?
- by Gerard_Ray_Frank |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/08/2008 |
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- Title: On Christmas Eve
- Artist: Gerard_Ray_Frank
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- Date: 12/08/2008
- Tags: christmas
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Comments (7 Comments)
- twinkle The Great - 11/04/2010
- A TOTAL 5.............................SUCH A POWERFUL POEM! UR A GOOD WRITTER!
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- twinkle The Great - 11/04/2010
- oh my gosh its such a powerful poem and its beautiful..................SO A 5!!!!!!!! CONGRATS!
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- Gotan01 - 11/15/2009
- hej, man its great it has a touch of modern poetry, but i like rhymes and thats why im not sure to give u a 5...ah wtf ill make it a 5
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- sempiternal_devastation - 05/21/2009
- I think maybe you should have it rhyme more. Its a good poem but it needs some work.
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- PzyQo - 01/10/2009
- that poem was awesome
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- lil_miz_cherylin - 12/29/2008
- totally awsome.....<speechless actually
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- Gerard_Ray_Frank - 12/18/2008
- Thanks, but I know you're just saying that. razz
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