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Hi Holly! Hi Jolly!
how are you today?
why arent you at home don't you know its christmas day?
I'm sorry we're not at home, its just we don't have one
you don't have one?! I say how can this be?!
its just that we have always live on the streets because our house was
taken away!
then where is your parents?
after our house got taken away they both got remarried and ran away!
im sorry what had happened to you how about you two come home with me to stay?
OK! this is our best christmas day!
(just in case)
ho ho ho! merry chrismas!
whats your name anyways?
Well i am Santa Claus don't you recognize my face?
oh right ok lets go in your sleigh!
- by misscute1107 |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/10/2008 |
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- Title: Christmas Day
- Artist: misscute1107
- Description: This is about a boy and girl having no home and going home with santa claus i hope you people like it! i worked hard on it if you don't like it then thats just fine
- Date: 12/10/2008
- Tags: christmas
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Azmaria Delavaga - 08/24/2009
- I like the poem, it's very creative.
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- aerdar - 04/28/2009
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- Shiro-Jin - 04/18/2009
- It needs a little bit of grammatical work, but it's not bad at all. n.n
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- NothingMoreThenMe - 04/09/2009
- pretty good.
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- The Invisible Mango - 12/10/2008
- NICE
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- xXFoxDeamonxX - 12/10/2008
- nice i think you need a little bit more work on it but its great if im gonna vote for it, it would be............4/5 good job keep it up
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