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a freind is like a flower,
a rose to be exact.
or maybe like a brand new gate,
that never comes unlatched.
a freind is like an owl,
both beautiful and wise.
or perhaps a freind is like a ghost,
whose spirit never dies.
a freind is like a heart that goes,
strong until the end.
where would we be in this world,
if we didnt have a freind?
its more than caring
to be a real freind.
a nature of freindship
requires a blend.
of warmest compassion
and deep love and true
to reach and comfort
the way you do.
because i can see
that youre kind freindship,
is priceless to me. heart heart heart FREINDS 4EVER!! heart heart heart
- by President cutie bunny |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/11/2008 |
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- Title: freindship
- Artist: President cutie bunny
- Description: freinds!!
- Date: 12/11/2008
- Tags: freindship
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Comments (7 Comments)
- KaTz Evans - 06/03/2011
- nice poem mhm *nods* 5/5 stars!!
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- --Viet_Starz-- - 09/19/2009
- 5/5 Good Job
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- Koveth - 06/30/2009
- I like how it rhymes and flows but misspelling friend annoyed me a little (I couldn't tell if it was on accident or on purpose). It's a good poem but I don't see how it relates to a holiday.
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- Pippays_way - 06/25/2009
- its ok
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- jakreel - 06/02/2009
- best poem yet 5/5
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- Xxrandom_panda_muffinzXx - 01/21/2009
- how cute!^^ 5/5 but i just dnt see how its holiday-ish at all... o well! 5/5 anyway!^^
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- Kookie King - 12/19/2008
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i love the poem quite quite good
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