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I woke up at 3 in the morning
And crept out of my bed
Waiting for santa to come
Cause no one is up yet
But I gradually fell asleep by the tree
And no more was it three
My parents and siblings were up
And they caught me embarassingly
But then we opened up the presents shortly
'Wow this is just what I wanted!", I said
A Baby doll and a mini drum
Then smiled at the perfect gifts get my parents get
So I played with them all day
And spent time with my family also
"Thank you mommy and daddy", I say
For giving a good Christmas to your little 5 year old
- Title: A 5-Year Olds Christmas
- Artist: Kaiieda
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Description:
This is basically a poem about a lilttle 5 year old girls christmas
Requested by someone XD earlier - Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: 5year olds christmas
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Bro Jaydens Here - 11/01/2009
- This is terrible...
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- bigprodigy - 12/31/2008
- hey that does sound like if we were 5 and hey cool poem cuz it reminds me of a lot of my girly cuzins that are 5 waitin for christmas day to open there presents
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- Renee the Rabid Squirrel - 12/24/2008
- Well you were accurate with your 5 year old rendering, because you can't stay in one tense for the life of you. And half the poem doesn't have diction that makes any sense.
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- Akienna - 12/24/2008
- Perhaps a 5 year old would have a better grasp of the English language...
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