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I love you like
The snow
Bold, clear, present
Upon approach
Feelings spiraling in
Vast and thrilling flurries.
-And when I want to utter
Words of adoration
Fast my courage melts;
Swiftly as flakes finding
Warm ground.
- by Marrionetta |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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- Title: Like the Snow
- Artist: Marrionetta
- Description: I finally managed to find a perfect metaphor for that 'oh man, I could never tell that special somebody how I feel' situation, how hard it is to say 'I love you.' The winter snowflakes represent conviction and determination, the will to express love. It's hard to hide a few billion frozen particles of water falling from the sky. The ground represents the goal of telling the loved one, and how hard-won confidence can be lost in the instant you're with them.
- Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: snow snowflakes winter love fear
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Shiny Gold Rose - 06/06/2010
- Cool :3
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- Plain_Old_Z - 08/13/2009
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I love it
thnks 4 the great poem - Report As Spam
- minato804 - 02/07/2009
- great metaphor
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- rewind r e w i n d - 01/20/2009
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THANK YOU. A real poem. (: The past few ones I was reading barely seemed like poems at all.
This one is beautiful. n_n - Report As Spam
- Lenea Myu-hime - 12/18/2008
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Perfect metaphor indeed. Ox Mind if I use it on a friend of mine? xD
Joking~. <3 Gotta find a friend first. xD - Report As Spam
- michelle_gal - 12/17/2008
- love it
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