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The brightening morn
So peaceful and still
Snowflakes from darkening clouds are torn
Three silent figures sitting on a hill
No footsteps heard
No movement unveiling
No chattering birds
No creatures their fellows hailing
There comes a movement slight
A squirrel does trill
A screeching crow takes flight
Three silent figures sitting on a hill
The gloomy clouds begin to shift
A blazing fire begins to shine
Between the white expanding rift
Striking terror into the hearts of thine
Quaking figures in the snow
No longer are they sitting still
Their fear begins to show
Three silent figures sitting on a hill
Their soft white skin begins to sweat
Young lives quickly hasted
Faces lined with deep regret
At time so swiftly wasted
As perspiration blends with tears
The sun burning ever still
Inspires a nameless fear
In these three silent figures sitting on a hill
Upon the morrow
Naught remains
But liquid sorrow
That slowly drains
Leaving nothing to show
Those who sat, silent, still
Waiting in the snow
Three silent figures sitting on a hill
- by Lord of the Dingbats |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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- Title: Three Silent Figures
- Artist: Lord of the Dingbats
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Description:
I wrote this waaay back when I was a freshman. ^_^
I suppose it's a bit of a riddle poem, not too tough, but some people don't get it... *sigh* Hehe.
Enjoy! <3 - Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: three silent figures snow christmas
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Comments (6 Comments)
- FoxxGirl0 - 02/07/2010
- its great ^_^
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- JediTears09 - 08/24/2009
- lizzie- ahm... it does rhyme. o_O
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- Silent_Whysper - 07/31/2009
- too long to read so ill just put 5/5 lolz looks nice though
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- lizzie2027 - 07/21/2009
- i like it but u should have rhymed u no so it would have a rythem 45
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- dido5333 - 01/11/2009
- obviously the person who wrote that comment before me has absolutely no idea on how great this poem is.
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- vampire_and_proud - 12/31/2008
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bad bad bad bad bad
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