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Fallen
Despair and loss is all she knows,
This broken angel, fallen from grace,
Has no where to go.
Her sins have expelled her from that beautiful place.
She sings a sad song, no words can describe,
A melody that brings a tear to the eye,
A sonnet for her lost love is all she knows.
A demon, straight from hell, fell in love with an angel
The secret he could not keep, now all he can do is weep.
All he can see in his mind are memories,
too strong to fade, he can't move on from the pain.
It's killing the two inside of their very souls,
A fallen angel and a lost love,
Two seperate tales of woe,
Combine to make the saddest tale you'll ever know.
- by Prettiest Pandabear |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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- Title: Fallen
- Artist: Prettiest Pandabear
- Description: I really and truly think this is my favorite poem, I spent a lot of time thinking about it even though it isn't too long. Enjoy!!
- Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: fallen
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Kazura Inuzuka - 02/15/2009
- I dont care if it is a holiday poem or not. that was the awsomest poem I have ever read; and trust me I have read a few. heheheh X3
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- Bass_Beau - 12/23/2008
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Well, it's not a holiday poem. Might have been better if you entered this in the regular poetry section.
The rhyming is nice in that it isn't super obvious, but the subject matter is so cliche that you can roast yourself in it.
Try to make this poem a little more fresh, new ideas, take the subject matter from a new angle.
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