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Christmas with you
This Christmas I am not alone
This Christmas I have somebody to hold
This Christmas doesn’t feel like last Christmas
This Christmas is when I came alive
Last Christmas I was sad
Last Christmas I was lonely
Last Christmas had nobody to hold
But then this Christmas came near
I was happy
I was excited because I had somebody to hold
This Christmas will be better with you than without you
- Title: christmas with you
- Artist: 100_jews
- Description: a poem i wrote in my spare time not much effort because its a holiday peom.
- Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: christmas with
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Lil Ashalind - 03/03/2009
- you couldave gone with last christmas first, then said this christmas ect. As in, sad to happy. Only cause its hard to identify the shifts in mood, i kinda got a lil lost towards the end. good work tho, i like the meaning involved smile
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- iP r 3 tt y P a n d a - 12/23/2008
- Could use some work, but still good.
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- Fruity Pomegranet - 12/20/2008
- its ok
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- 100_jews - 12/18/2008
- please comment?
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