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Ashes falling from the sky
People thinking it's snow
But then, a young girl passing by,
Tastes it, and suddenly, they know
"There's evil in there," the whispers say
"We should do something!" the people cry
"But what can we do?" others say
And so they continue, time passing by
As their neighbors are led away
- by Takiko_catgirl |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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- Title: Ashes
- Artist: Takiko_catgirl
- Description: Another one of my Holocaust poems. It doesn't have to do with winter or the holidays, neccessarily, but I feel that we should never forget those that died, not even in the midst of all this merriment.
- Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: ashes holocaust holiday remember nazi
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Shawty Go Hard - 08/27/2009
- Very depressing but I love the ryming(: Nice job but i'd give you 2/5
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- Tranzendental Trumpet Man - 08/26/2009
- Really outstanding poem! Very beautiful. (Well, as beautiful as a poem about the attempted extermination and cremation of an entire race of people can be.) Really well done.
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- Zstanley - 07/22/2009
- Nice poem
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- King175 - 06/05/2009
- its ok but i can do better
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- masta mole - 04/18/2009
- yea its good i like the ryming but i dont reely understand the end
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- iTofuu - 01/09/2009
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really sad, but what happened then? please add on, for i like rhyming. :]
as you can see, i give you a rate,
will you give one to me?
for a cookie?
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many thanks i offer,
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- Lord bdog470 - 12/21/2008
- what a beautiful poem 5/5
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