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A Christmas Day
I Wake up to early
My family still sleep
My hair is still curly
go downstairs for a peek
i gaze and gaze upon the boxes
filled the room my mind is now slick like foxes
i peel off the paper piece by piece
i'm extra careful not to disturb the peace
my patients grows thin
i open my presents with a grin
for now i have sinned
and my frown turns upside down
for there's nothing within
parents jump out and tell me shame
the give me my real present a brand new game
i was so happy and all i had to say
Merry Christmas on
A Christmas Day
- by Princ3Pau1 |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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- Title: Christmas Day
- Artist: Princ3Pau1
- Description: My poem of my christmas day experience,
- Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: christmas
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Comments (3 Comments)
- sheeka98 - 05/27/2009
- i think some of the lines in this poem are to long or have to many words other than that everything is fine. i am not a critic but i give you a 4
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- puppiesrcute705 - 12/28/2008
- nice but cool too
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- pinkpepper877 - 12/16/2008
- hahaha, niiice
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