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Early December
I put my hand on his shoulder
And ask the fateful question:
"Will you go to the dance with me"
"I don't know"
He replies slowly
We e-mail rapidly
"I'm not dancing with you"
He says
"I'd rather play foozball"
I was ecstatic
Filling me with Joy to the brim
"So, will you go with me?"
I ask just one more time
"Uh, no thanks"
Broken
Pitfall
Dead inside
Day of the dance
Christmas lights
Music blaring
Cold rain biting my nose
Dance like a fool
Then when a bad song comes on
I go into the gym
And he's playing
Ping-Pong ball
with another boy
I walk over
and give him a nice hug
in return
he elbows me in the neck
"You don't want to kill your friend
Do you?"
I ask
"Who said you were my friend?"
Broken
Pitfall
Dead inside
I slump to the floor
Fighting back tears
He hates me
He likes everyone
but me
Broken
Pitfall
Dead inside
Now I'm trying to forget
But I see him every day
In the halls
During lunch
In my classes
And every time I see him
I feel
Broken
Pitfall
Dead inside
- Title: Broken, Pitfall, Dead inside
- Artist: Zupatrupa
- Description: This is a poem basically about this relationship with a guy I knew.
- Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: heart cold snow
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Comments (7 Comments)
- chibi_cara - 01/10/2010
- ;;; im glad a dont have a bf ;;;
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- Sporkazoid - 05/31/2009
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I feel the exact same way.
x///3
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- TokyoFever - 05/25/2009
- cool
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- Sexy_hot _Kida - 05/05/2009
- i love your poem
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- Dreamy unidenified - 02/06/2009
- i like yours ill have to give you a 100...........
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- gigi the hotty - 12/22/2008
- Ouch.
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- iSupaDupa - 12/21/2008
- Nice poem. Ouch.
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