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The clear ice floating down
The slow trickling water
With moonlight shining through the clear water
As snow slowly falling down to forest trees
And falling down to the white piece of ground
As White Christmas slowly comes along
With the slow drifting ice falling
With nature moonlight
- by yuki305032 |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/13/2008 |
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- Title: Winter
- Artist: yuki305032
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- Date: 12/13/2008
- Tags: winter
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Zizty Ytziz - 01/23/2011
- really beautiful and descriptive. smile
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- Master narutoxlr - 05/19/2009
- alsome
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- xxxemo-princess666xxx - 02/03/2009
- i lik the whol nature perspectiv but wrk on ur grammar n comma usage n i think it needs 2 b a littl mor outstanding. its kinda blah, lik sumthing sum1 might read 2 lines of n go "pssh waste of time"
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