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Miles apart from your voice
The touches fade like a bruise
I would be with you if I had a choice
But I didn't have a say, I didn't get to choose.
Didn't you hear my gentle whispers?
Didn't you see the signs?
That voice in the back said to gently kiss her
But it's the end of the line.
I once held you tight
But now that's gone
it's hard to find a light
I'm trying to be strong
You left me without saying a word
And that's the last thing I heard.
I still feel your prescence
Even though you're not here
I'm still learning the life long lessons
But I can't seem to break my fear.
I just want you to hold me like you were suppose to do
Tell me sweet whispers through movement that soothes
I want you to know even though your not near
They'll always be a place in my heart saved with tears.
- by Usako_Rouge |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/13/2008 |
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- Title: Miles Apart
- Artist: Usako_Rouge
- Description: I wrote this actually a couple years ago when my long term crush that was my best friend just got his phone disconnected and moved away. Today, we're actually together :) So yay for happy endings =^.^=
- Date: 12/13/2008
- Tags: miles apart
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Seraphine Holodore - 09/19/2010
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... I've seen better.
The good news for you is, I've also seen worse here on Gaia, so I'll moderate yours up to a 4/5. - Report As Spam
- The Virgin Slayer - 06/28/2010
- OMG i love it! This is what i would imagine my love would say or write. Iv'e been friends with him since 2nd grade , buthe had to move away in the middle of 4th grade. I was young back then and i din't know about love, but now when i look back on it he was giving me a lot of signs. It's to late now. 5/5
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- Genesis2k35 - 03/23/2009
- Glad for you!
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- rosebuds17 - 12/28/2008
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aww, very good, I love it
I'm glad you two are together again smile - Report As Spam
- Formal Rice Farmer - 12/14/2008
- I like it. It holds the type of truth that one can only see through another's eyes...
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