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you tempt me yet again
i wonder what you are thinking
wonder what goes thru your head
when you almost throw it all away
i see you struggling, yet so confused
your confusion, tempts me
makes me wanna cry, yell scream at the same
all in one breath, i wonder what goes thru your head
all the time spent together
the years of friendship,
this last year of love
you tempt your heart to give up
you tempt me to do the same
i am holding on,
can you do the same?
- by snooky_munster |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/13/2008 |
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- Title: you tempt me yet again!
- Artist: snooky_munster
- Description: its about a relationship which is under a lot of pressure, and whether to throw it away or keep working on it.about keeping strong in each other
- Date: 12/13/2008
- Tags: tempt again
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Comments (2 Comments)
- lady bluej - 02/04/2009
- ummm... i guess u got the message across and its nice wording .... kind of random but ok
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- angelalana101 - 12/31/2008
- Isn't this supposed to be a holiday poetry contest? What does it have to do with holidays I like the poem, but does it really fit the mood?
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