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Winter Days
During winter, the trees are bare
And during this time, snow is in the air.
It floats, dances, skips and plays,
As it drifts to earth on winter days.
I wake up one cold morning to the snow in the air,
And open my window to feel it blow everywhere.
I put on my snow gear, to keep myself warm,
While I go outside to watch the winds swarm.
Your first walk through the snow,
You feel and cold and then you know,
The ice is slick, so I trip and fall,
And land on the ground and watch the snow fall.
The snow’s so cold, I need to rest,
So I go inside to catch my breath.
But before you know it the snow is gone,
And I wake up to spring in the early dawn.
- Title: Winter Days
- Artist: oarly
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Description:
Ummm.... I saw this contest and wanted to enter it. At first, i couldnt think of a poem and then I remembered I wrote one for school (I edited it a bit). Umm... i don't think its that great, but tel me if ya think differently. Hope ya enjoy it!
Have Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year! ^^ - Date: 12/13/2008
- Tags: winter days poem holiday contest
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Comments (7 Comments)
- EmiKo_KajuJi04 - 12/02/2009
- i think....its not so great...NOT!! i think its awesome!!! 5/5!!! good luck! hope u win!!!
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- Flexi Ruler - 02/20/2009
- I hope ur poem wins its really good.
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- Boncss_16 - 02/18/2009
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Nice poem I think thats great I love it really
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- smiling fool - 12/18/2008
- That was a really great poem! I hope you win! Mine really reeks.
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- Nanally - 12/17/2008
- Wow happyangel, your poem is great! ^^
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- Wondergirls129 - 12/15/2008
- Great poem!
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- cupcakecutiepie - 12/14/2008
- it's so beautiful! good luck!
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