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Christmas is a time for gladness,
With eggnog filling lots of glasses.
The Christmas spirit you can see
For presents 're under the Christmas tree.
With all the stockings over flowing,
The fireplace is brightly glowing.
The hot chocolates steamin', the marshmallows 're meltin',
And the family's inside merrily decoratin'.
Tinsel and lights twinkle away.
The sounds of bells remind us of sleighs.
The smell of ginger and pine
Help us reminisce the olden time.
After eating candies and cookies galore,
The children are ready to explore.
Snow on the ground crunches under their feet
While mom's inside baking another good treat.
The children had lots of fun
Now that the day is all done.
They're too excited and can't fall asleep.
They've tried everything, from lying still to counting sheep.
The parents are putting up the last touches for Christmas,
While the children's' night is extremely restless.
The children don't dream of sugarplums this night;
They're too busy wondering what their presents will be like.
Would Santa Claus come again this year?
For the bells on his sleigh, you never could hear.
Not one of the children have ever seen that jolly old soul,
But their parents are good friends with him, or so they are told.
Christmas is such a beautiful day.
It's the feeling of giving that makes it that way.
The gifts are all open, and the day is now done.
The best thing of all is that Santa DID come! heart 3nodding
- Title: The Christmas Holliday
- Artist: AnnaAliah
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- Date: 12/13/2008
- Tags: christmas holliday
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Really Big Homo - 10/10/2010
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Nuh-Uh. This is the best poem I've seen so far. I love it. The rhyming for " With all the stockings over flowing,
The fireplace is brightly glowing.
The hot chocolates steamin', the marshmallows 're meltin',
And the family's inside merrily decoratin'." Is the only part that was terribly done. 5/5 I love it!
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- SashaFurdacion - 03/01/2009
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The rhyming was terrible. Atrocious.
But it did flow relatively nice.
A lot of people, when they write story poems, can't get it right. But you did. Good job! - Report As Spam
- kittman11 - 01/02/2009
- :stares: 5/5 best poem #1
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- cutiepie451 - 01/02/2009
- wtf sorry but its... i duno lol x nice avitar tho x
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