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Dear Santa,
Stars don't grant wishes,
And no snow makes me cheery.
I just cover my ears.
And it makes me weary.
Mommy and Daddy fight.
And I want them to stop.
So please read my list.
It's at the top.
I just want to see them.
Both at the same time.
To see them together.
Is that such a crime?
So, please Mr. Santa.
Make this come true.
God won't listen.
Now I only have you.
- by randomwords44 |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/13/2008 |
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- Title: Dear Santa
- Artist: randomwords44
- Description: Okay. This is about a child who only wants their parents to stop fighting and be happy. Since her prayers and wishes were unanswered she writes santa a letter in hopes that he will respond to her with her wish.
- Date: 12/13/2008
- Tags: dear santa
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Adeselna - 07/11/2009
- This is the only so far really cool smile
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- xHelloxDollxFacex - 01/16/2009
- God will listen to everything!!!!!
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- Ninjy - 12/23/2008
- I like it, it's really touching when looking at the child's point of view. Rate me back? Thanka and good luck to you too. <3
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- Hinata-chan321 - 12/22/2008
- nice
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- JeiJei17 - 12/21/2008
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the last part where in So, please Mr. Santa.
Make this come true.
God won't listen.
Now I only have you.
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i agree to dark_night, god will answer anything..
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- XiaoKittyCat - 12/19/2008
- Like I've said before, the last stanza makes me wanna burst into tears. Keep up the depressing work. biggrin
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- Im_The_Dark_Assasin_XXX - 12/17/2008
- ...Lame God will answer everything....
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