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I do not like butterflies:
Their bright colors;
Their showy patterns;
Gracefully fluttering from flower to flower.
I much prefer moths:
Their dull wings;
Their sensible design;
Swiftly speeding directly from here to there.
I worry though,
that the moths prefer the butterflies.
Are they enchanted by the fluorescent brightness?
Maybe that's why they always fly into the fire:
Kamikaze style.
Will they ever learn?
Chasing something that beautiful
Can only end in tragedy.
~Maxine~
- Title: Beautiful Butterflies
- Artist: LaLadrona
- Description: Written for creative writing class in a fit of near angst. Everyone seems pleased though...
- Date: 12/14/2008
- Tags: beauty freeverse butterfly tragedy
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Comments (3 Comments)
- F Asakura - 06/26/2010
- Uhm, very interesting! o.o 5/5
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- XX_FallenDreamm_XX - 03/20/2009
- I like it because it shows that the world has a different perspective in life and not only loves thing that are beautiful
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- Orange Affair - 12/15/2008
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This is very Haiku-like. Only...it's not. HOW CONFUSING.
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