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Have you ever seen a hypocrite?
It’s the Latin name for liar.
“Do as I say, not as I do.”
I find these insects wherever I go.
Should I start a collection?
In this case is mother:
“Don’t sit so close to the screen!” She cries
As I breathe in second hand smoke.
And here we have an art teacher:
“Use your inner creativity,” She demands
As she distributes our instructions.
And another fine specimen under glass; a priest:
“Love thy neighbor,” He preaches
As he ostracizes the black sheep from the flock.
I put them all in gilded cages.
I study them intently.
I hear their words-
Like crickets chirping-
Soothing in their regularity,
Holding as much weight as a fluttering butterfly.
I like my new collection.
Entomology has never been so fun.
~Maxine~
- Title: Entomology
- Artist: LaLadrona
- Description: An extended metaphore dealing with hypocrites. BTW- Entomology is the study of bugs.
- Date: 12/14/2008
- Tags: freeverse metaphore entomology hypocrites
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Comments (7 Comments)
- iluveiejustinbieber - 06/18/2009
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ur right animeboy892 it ok but what have to do with hoidays
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- rockooe - 05/22/2009
- 5/5
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- xxxdhuntersxxx - 05/16/2009
- YES YOU SHOULD START A COLLECTION.. GUDLUCK
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- xX_Kozakura_Xx - 02/27/2009
- RHYME SCHEMES PEOPLE, USE THEM. other than that not bad 4/5.
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- RyeoJackson - 01/29/2009
- Good Poem.... ^^
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- animeboy892 - 12/23/2008
- It's a good poem but whats it got to do with the holidays?
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- magic taco bunneh - 12/21/2008
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nice 5/5
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