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- Title: Alyssia
- Artist: Heaven_Leigh_Treasure
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Description:
As I kneel at Her feet I can feel Her strength and power
I yearn for Her touch and Her smile.
I long to hear Her voice and share in the joy
She takes my hand and wipes away my fears
And enlightens my world, She is my world
Where there was darkness there is now light
She shows me the way and I gladly follow
She owns my heart and my body and soul
She is my Teacher and my Enchantress
She will teach and I will learn
She is the One I serve.
- Tinman
- Date: 09/07/2011
- Tags: alyssia
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Pikachew - 09/19/2011
- I don't think you needed the flower or the red crown, but the rest of the avatar is beautiful. The double space format bothered me a little, however, the poem was nice. Good to know your themes and layering skills haven't lost their touch. Congratulations.
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- Aegis - 09/19/2011
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Congratulations.
Lovely as a poem. - Report As Spam
- Aeriall - 09/17/2011
- I love the poem but the avi itself is a little cluttered but pretty
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- iArenaCritic - 09/16/2011
- not really original. every week someone uses that background. ;l 3/5
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- Misty McFierceFierce - 09/16/2011
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Er, could have gone without the poem
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- Aiawen - 09/16/2011
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Beautiful, soft color schemes and poetry as well?! o3o
The only thing that docked off a point was that there was a little clutter for the head and torso of the avi, but besides that, great job! =D - Report As Spam
- Katiesaur - 09/15/2011
- I love this avi. I absolutely love everything about it. Just as Vespis and Atum said, you ave a good eye for complimenting colours.
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