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- Title: I'm Your Cavity
- Artist: Toxik Salad
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Description:
Feeling a silent pain
or ache to wince
For your foolish desire
Im here as you gluttonously wished
Dont bite down or do please do
Oh isnt it tasty Isnt it divine
My sweetness with a pinch of sour
Savor the taste
Theres no rush
Hmm oh Those you say
Dont mind them
They don't bite
Whats this now
Im the pain that hinders you
Havent you realized it yet
Tsk really now
Cant you see
Whats been done
was by you alone
I thought youd know
eating sugary sweets and sour-like treats
that cavities would grow - Date: 10/30/2011
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Toxik Salad - 11/05/2011
- Thank you all for your rates and comments. I really appreciate them, mostly on the poem. Since its the first poem I have ever written. I don't particularly find interest in writing and reading literature. The poem was kind of like a spontaneous spark, and I even amazed myself with the outcome. Though its nothing fancy, I still find it amusing and satisfying. . u.
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- Gay Pornography - 11/05/2011
- amazing~
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- Sex Virus - 11/05/2011
- <3
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- The Dancing Doll - 11/04/2011
- I want caveties now!!! 8'D 5/5 for the avi and poem.
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- SecretInTheIce - 11/04/2011
- I like this avi vary much. It has a nice bitter-sweet feel to it. At lest i think so><^^ Great job^^
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- BlueXorcist - 11/04/2011
- wow genius ! never would have been able to balance all these color combinations :3 5/5
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- Desthild - 11/03/2011
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I like it.!!
The color combination is quite unique. 5/5 - Report As Spam
