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- | Submitted on 03/09/2009 |
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- Title: Séance for my Father
- Artist: SparkleMuse
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Description:
Years have passed and sorrow fades
Memories dull like cold steel blades.
Sometimes I think I forget your face,
Your voice has left no sound to trace.
I turn to spirits to bring me hope,
To see you again to help me cope.
You appear to me, it’s not the same.
I regret this weakness and fall to shame.
Why did I do this? Why did I bother?
I rue this séance for my father.
- Date: 03/09/2009
- Tags: sance father ebenezer steel
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Comments (7 Comments)
- SparkleMuse - 03/24/2009
- Thank you so much for all the kind comments. I really appreciate it everyone!
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- rallyhoo - 03/24/2009
- I have to agree that it seems very well done, mixing a lot of serenity with creativity. This should be first place.
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- VampRay - 03/24/2009
- both the avi and the poem are first grade
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- theunforgettable111 - 03/24/2009
- this one should be in 1st place
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- Salted Rubber Pants - 03/23/2009
- How Did This Not Win? Wow... Voters These Days tsk tsk
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- MayhemPuppet - 03/23/2009
- Amazing. =]
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- Glow Styx - 03/23/2009
- Wow...that's awesome.
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