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- Title: Under the Weather
- Artist: Intriguing
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Description:
The strange Mr. Sampson walks home from a long day's work of being under the weather. He faces continual torment from his new associate, Mr. Furugou.
Furugou: I told you not to swing that sword around like that...
Sampson: Shut up.
Furugou: I really don't want you to think that I'm trying to get a leg up on you...
Sampson: You only have one.
Furugou: So we match, ne?
Sampson: ...Go away!
Furugou: Are you in need of an umbrella?
Constructive criticism appreciated. - Date: 11/14/2009
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Comments (7 Comments)
- twilightdevil - 11/23/2009
- The colourcombination is great. But it's so chaotic. And still that chaos appeals a bit. Well done
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- smellpotatoes - 11/22/2009
- heart
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- Miss Blissy - 11/21/2009
- That is genius. I personally really like the eyes and color matching... plus all the clever puns. 5/5
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- Toxik Salad - 11/19/2009
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o Ao"
I love the ending pun.
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- chiaroscuro13 - 11/19/2009
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There is not much constructive cirticism I can offer, my friend. Good choice of background, the avi is not overly cluttered, there is a good balance b/w character and ensembles.
Let's see, the best part for me is the rawness around the eyes.
And the story,haha! Reminds me of that old joke about the man with the wooden leg named Smith.
5/5 from me, you'll do a rockin' job man!
Let me know how it turns out!! mrgreen - Report As Spam
- BnW x3 - 11/18/2009
- Looks great! biggrin
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- Mikey-Chan5 - 11/17/2009
- 5/5 ^^
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