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- | Submitted on 06/03/2010 |
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- Title: BlackN'blueN' white all over
- Artist: JaggedRuby
- Description: took along time to make lol what do you think
- Date: 06/03/2010
- Tags: blacknbluen white over
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- sleepypuppy3 - 06/07/2010
- I know submissions isn't all about color, but based on your title and the absence of a theme, I'm assuming that color coordination is what you're aiming, so that's what I'm scoring you on. Also, maybe a cincher around the middle, too blue and bare around there. Take off the legwarmer, wear some more clothes to show a little more creativity with layering. Yes, I know you said you took a long time, but with the color tabs on tektek, I'm sure you can make a much better avi with a bit more effort.
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- sleepypuppy3 - 06/07/2010
- 1/5 First off, blue's all different shades of blue. Brown on buckle is out of place. The crisscross stuff across the stomach should be taken off. You should take off the mask too, not only can you not see the mask properly (which defeats the whole purpose of wearing one), it also adds a bit of brown to it that you don't need. And no, the brown on the mask does not balance out the brown on the buckle. I would suggest black hair instead, too much blue all cluttered on the head.
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