- Title: Bertolph the Brilliant
- Artist: [Techi]
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Description:
Bertolph the Russian magician,
Poor man suffered malnutrition,
With his stick-thin legs,
And no matter how many eggs,
He had never failing ambition.
Corakas the Crow by his side,
On his shoulder this black bird would ride,
Kept pecking his ear,
Till he could hardly even hear,
Mangled worms for this bird he'd provide.
For their brilliance the pair were renowned,
Worldwide fame was where these two were bound,
But then Bertolph he died,
From a pain in his side,
And Corakas was never to be found.
- Date: 09/22/2010
- Tags: bertolph
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Deleted Accnt - 10/04/2010
- I love the face. biggrin
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- Fuji_hobo_jacket - 10/04/2010
- I like the avatar but some of the lines in the poem just don't flow. D:
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- Caiesylle - 10/04/2010
- Beautifully anorexic, great job! I love the creativity of the poem, this entry made me smile!
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- Kiliko - 10/04/2010
- His face is awesome, but I don't like his outfit. It's watered down and clashy. His legs complete the weakling look, but the crappy uneven pattern in them subtracts from his more well tailored clothes.
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- A Fitting End - 10/04/2010
- This is my favorite! It should have beat mine.
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- authentic alliteration - 10/04/2010
- Original and nice to look at. Simple, but sometimes that is sweet.
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- idaruishinee - 10/04/2010
- now this is winner's circle quality..i just wish it would've placed higher
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