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- | Submitted on 09/17/2006 |
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- Title: The Power Within
- Artist: kumichinen888
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Description:
[---PLEASE READ,ITZ MY FIRST TIME---]
Long,long ago,there was a temple high in the northern parts of Asia. At the temple, ninjas of all races could find their inner strength,powers,goals, and etc.
Yet none of those ninjas could be compared to the mighty ninja Makitsusama. She had the grace of a crane, the strength of a tiger, the aerobics of a snake, and the heart of a dragon. It is said that she was born from the legendary Kitsunashi for she had the tale,ears,and whiskers of that creature. - Date: 09/17/2006
- Tags: ninja grace strength heartofdragon powerful
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Comments (7 Comments)
- mjrinella - 09/17/2006
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Hmm, it is a cute idea, and its clear that you put
thought into it. However, the story is uninspired
and dull, and the avvie doesn't look like a ninja.
Try to improve - with some adjustments, you could
be great! - Report As Spam
- Mr.Brad Pitt - 09/17/2006
- cool
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- Naruto_Uzumaki_341 - 09/17/2006
- Awesome! i give u a 10...umm can u add me?
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- lilsimmie12 - 09/17/2006
- nice ! 8/10
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- -[Magical Leoploridon]- - 09/17/2006
- huh?
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- SumomoSoCute - 09/16/2006
- legwarmers? no way. nice story fix the avatar.
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- xCrimzen - 09/16/2006
- Your chi is great!!
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