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- | Submitted on 10/29/2006 |
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- Title: The Black Parade
- Artist: total-pyro
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Description:
When I was
A young boy
My father
Took me into the city
To see a marching band.
He said "Son when
You grow up,
Will you be
The saviour of the broken,
The beaten, and the damned?"
He said, "Will you
Defeat them,
Your demons,
And all the non-believers,
The plans that they have made?
Because one day
I'll leave you
A phantom
To lead you in the summer
To join the Black Parade."
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So this is my first Arena entry! The inspiration is the song 'Welcome to the Black Parade' by - Date: 10/29/2006
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Sweet666Poison - 10/25/2006
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looks like you have male parts on your face, is
horrible, take it off. - Report As Spam
- Bubbled - 10/25/2006
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Its a nice idea but you could have made it a lot
more like the video. Maybe used something on your
eyes, red and black flowers. Stockings?
Also
might have been better to use a male avatar? - Report As Spam
- EowynDernhelm - 10/25/2006
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You are a girl. Your story says "son".
Um.
No. - Report As Spam
- evilmoney123 - 10/25/2006
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hi-
doesnt really remind me of the song.... ill
give you a 5 for trying... - Report As Spam
- xConfusedxHeartxBrakex - 10/25/2006
- 5/10 sorry.....
- Report As Spam
- aira341 - 10/24/2006
- What...The....Hell...
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- a Clockwork Science - 10/24/2006
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I don't like it. You have a nice idea starting
with the description, but be a tad more creative
as well. Avatars can be simple and still good,
but you look like you could use a few more
adornments. - Report As Spam
