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  • Title: Swamp Troll
  • Artist: CA3SAR
  • Description: It lurks in the muck, stalking you as you paddle through with your date on a not so sunny afternoon. You begin to strum you guitar, unaware that you are calling it towards you, inviting it to interrupt your special moment. As you gaze into the eyes of your loved one, you overlook its spiny form rising from the swamp. It bellows. You scream. It strikes.

    Please leave a message telling me what you do or do not like. Thank you.
  • Date: 10/04/2009
  • Tags: swamp troll
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • Commander Tobias - 10/11/2009
  • ...."and even to this day, when young lovers venture out onto the brackish waters, they say you can still hear the music of a guitar, floating over the algae and creepy life below..." Just a thought. Best wishes
  • Commander Tobias - 10/11/2009
  • I like the concept, and love the story!!! I just wish I could see its head. I feel like the samurai helmet does not compliment your creature. However, I really do like it, and I think you could even write a short horror story based on the idea of your description. The thought that a love song played on a guitar can call the creature forth from the murky waters, really calls to me. If you do write it I would love to read it.
    5/5
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