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- Title: the statute (2nd entry)
- Artist: Box Top Education
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Description:
from another world, came trampling in,
no grander man disbanded.
all the persons, wondering,
how a man can single handed.
put away his heritage,
deny that he is royal.
and capture beast so grand and tame,
the beauty to the spoil.
see his heart was truly rotten,
under gold he did protect.
a soul conquered in darkness,
and that, his eye projects. - Date: 10/10/2009
- Tags: dragon gold silver knight angelic
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Nocturnal parasite - 10/18/2009
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Cluttered and unoriginal..
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- xyz_delete_my_account_zyx - 10/17/2009
- Too cluttered, but still a 4
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- Yona_Babe - 10/14/2009
- A bit too cluttered. But still 4/5 because I love the poem and the color composition.
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- Heil Travy - 10/12/2009
- waaaay to jumbled and cluttered. make it more neat. statues are a mass of color and shapes, but they project what they are made to. it goes along with the poem though.
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