- Title: The Night it all Changed...
- Artist: Uraith
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Description:
To wake and find your home destroyed, and you the only survivor of the village... Imagine the rage that builds within. Armed with your Wits and Steel and accompanied by your familiar, what kind of person will you become? Will you have bloodthirsty Vengeance, or will you follow the way of the Law?
(BTW: my first ever submission for Avatar. Please, be honest.) - Date: 02/01/2010
- Tags: night changed
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Comments (3 Comments)
- blueXblood777 - 02/14/2010
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Well, welcome to the Art Arena! I don't really get why you put the blue elements in, but it looks interesting. I like the description a lot, too. Nice effort! 4/5
Loss sweeps upon the flaming winds.
Friends, family and homes are lost to the blaze.
Waking to this nightmare, alone and afraid,
You search for the ones who destroyed your life, burned and razed. - Report As Spam
- a voice from YOU and ME - 02/11/2010
- I don't quite understand why he has blue skin. Also the shield looks awkward and there's too much orange with nothing cutting the color. Maybe you should go for things that aren't in a set next time, as well. Plus the sword doesn't match, but I like your description, unlike most people you seemed to put effort into that, so I'll give you a 4.
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- Trillium_Fae - 02/10/2010
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Firstly, welcome to the arena! 4laugh I like your description, and the concept of your avi is great. The only thing I would try to remedy is the shield - because its so brightly colored and centered, it becomes the focal point and takes away from the rest. Otherwise, this is a great job! blaugh
Rate back please? http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/gaia/original-avatar/vote/?entry_id=101977397#title - Report As Spam
