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- | Submitted on 07/04/2010 |
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- Title: Dead Water Bride
- Artist: Axen Axiel
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Description:
From the West she comes,
your bride to become.
Yet your selfish heart denies.
The gown of blue,
She adored, from you,
could never, yet, satisfy.
So you stabbed her so,
and roses grown
To satisfy the lust.
The pond astir
the water impure.
Lust and Rage
Combined to just
Remold the balance
As she crushed.
His neck still young
they water to thirst
vengeance comes swift
His heart has burst. - Date: 07/04/2010
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Aerovinity - 07/11/2010
- I feel it should have a maybe more gothic feel? But this is Stunning. I hope this places, because it definitely has the makings of a winner, that's for sure. 5 stars, i wish you very much luck.
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- myruna-chan - 07/09/2010
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ooh darky?
rate back?
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- Mars Petrichor - 07/07/2010
- I'm really digging this.
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- Seth Shadowrider - 07/06/2010
- Amazing. But you seem to have the true feeling for your avatar! So im gonna say you deserve 5 stars.
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