- Title: The heart's betrayal
- Artist: Nekoink
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Description:
How could she know?
A close friend like a sister
Made a choice that hurt her so
Ran out to the snow
Her heart wept, tears frozen
Footsteps echoed among snowy trees
Breaths like winter smoke
Gasping sobs a stuttered song
She came to stop, legs sank into the snow
Wings flutter silenced her
Snow doves in flight into the sky
Wings turned into stars, eyes linger to the night
Trail of light blazed in the sky
Offered to her prayer
A frost bitten heart seeks springs warmth - Date: 05/09/2011
- Tags: winter heart
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Lady March Hare - 05/22/2011
- Very nice. Your avie is simple, yet it follows the general mood of your poem very well. I like it. ^_^
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- The Epic Tree - 05/20/2011
- Very nice. It was perfect even before reading the poem! 5/5
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- shappyshap - 05/18/2011
- Very nice poem!
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- Blue Lyme - 05/17/2011
- beautiful poem and i think having her back turned is perfect for it
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