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- | Submitted on 02/13/2013 |
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- Title: Sour Kitty
- Artist: Zonbi ni iku
- Description: Clair the sour kitty is a stray. She once had a loving home but she went for a walk one day and took wrong turn. She got lost and ran into a couple of cold-hearted females who robbed her of diamond collar and through her into the river. She managed to get on a log and float down river but not before going by the factory and being exposed to toxic waste.
- Date: 02/13/2013
- Tags: sour kitty
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Comments (7 Comments)
- yuuki_cross2010 - 02/23/2013
- Cute, has lots of potential.
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- Zonbi ni iku - 02/22/2013
- I was very careful not to use more than one of each item. I got alot of critiques last time for using set stuff. I used toxic kiki, sour apple, sickly triplet, lucie, black wool shirt, heart eye patch (i love thing and it will be in every outfit unless there is no possible way that it matches. I would love someone to critique my stuff before I submit it. I just wish I had friends that were willing.
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- AzurePrototype - 02/22/2013
- Try asking around the forums before you submit next time. Ask for strict critique. That way you'll know if you're arena-ready before you enter.
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- AzurePrototype - 02/22/2013
- Pets, or Companions, are almost never a good idea. The eyepatch doesn't seem to have a place either. The tail and hair match (the same item?) so try basing the rest of the greens off of that. Also... well... the dress is just a single item that takes up your entire body, which doesn't leave much room for creative item combos even IF the leaf green on the dress didn't clash with the hair.
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- Vip Storm - 02/21/2013
- is she like sawer kandy LOL 5/5 pleas vote for my avatar unseen hero
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- Zonbi ni iku - 02/21/2013
- I am working on it guys, My last entry was not very original so I am trying to be more creative. The dress is the sickly triplet or something like that. and the animals were part of the story but apparently we only get 500 letters, not 500 words. So that kind of ruined my story.
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- Confusional - 02/20/2013
- The animals look really out of place. You should have a different, brighter green for the dress.
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