I am Dead . . . yet Living

• Artist: mucly
• Description: i don't want to tell you what this person needs to feed on to survive it would just ruin the whole thing . . . NO ITS NOT FREAKIN BLOOD
• Date: 10/07/2008
• Tags: dead

Can't you see . . . my bones are dust my blood run dry . . . i will live forever . . . am living forever. I am not a vampire, though I do not deny their existance. No i feed on something that is not blood. . . I don't need blood. . . but as long as what I need exists in this world i will be hear. . . I will live. If you call ones heart no longer beating living.

Comments

[mucly]

stupid musical man gosh so mean. . . its obviously somone speaking to someone else my freind said she liked it . . . mabye she lie ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh . . . shes a liar . . . hahahahahahahaahahahahah . . . he

[XxxAvaxxX]

Sorry, but this wasn't good. It was confusing and I didn't know what on Earth was happening. I agree with The_Musical_Soldier that you have no characters, no detailed setting, it's really just a bunch of words strung together. So, sorry, but 0/5 stars.
Ciao xx

[The_Musical_Soldier]

There is no story, no characters, no details, not even a name or a hint to what keeps you a live. Truly you can do better and if no, I suggest you put the pen down here for this is just absolutely horrible.

[The_Musical_Soldier]

I'm sorry...but this is down right horrible. Not only has this idea been said in multiple different ways but you take something and put an unrealistic feeling to it. Vampire exist because of blood, this is because their body can not produce blood to run through their veins and a functioning heart for it'll still beat but, it doesn't produce blood as ours would. This giving a realistic view to Vampires. You, however, took this idea away and created a short description of nothing. There is no stor

[TheYellowCrayonz]

I wonder how you make one.

[xCubia]

VERY SHORT!