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His eyes leak tears
Mind races with thoughts of her
She's always there, in the back of his mind
He thinks of her every damn day and
How she treated him.
She made him do this, all her fault
She'll never know why.
She doesnt even know that he loved her.
One look, she looked back.
He wanted to know her
Spoke only a sentence to her
and got treated horridly.
It's all connected.
Most others hate him.
A lot want him to just die.
Laugh at his grave, they will.
He knows it. As soon as the
cool metal touches his vein
breaks the protective layering,
he'll bleed out.
And now it's done.
Blood pours fiercely from the wound.
The red liquid flares out upon the cement
He merely continues to cry,
curled in a ball.
The blood's stained his clothes.
His skin's cold, eyes glazed over.
face streaked from tears.
He's dead.
Body resting in a pool of blood.
His blood.
His crimson teardrop on the world.
And she hears of this.
This suicide.
she doesn't make the connection.
She does attend the funeral.
The rain soaks everyone's black clothes as they watch the wooden coffin.
It falls into the hole, containing the body of a sad teenager.
A mother weeps, a father holds her.
To her surprise, she feels water on her face.
It's not rain, but tears, falling from her eyes.
She cries, not hard, for his death.
She knew him, spoke only once to him.
But now he's gone. This boy she once met.
The one who tried to be nice to her, she treated him like s**t.
Amazed with herself,
she lay down that night, wondering.
She wondered why anyone would
commit suicide. Take one's own life.
She thought of how she had treated him the two weeks before his death.
Horrible, she was.
A b***h to him for naught.
She considered herself to be part of his
lonely suicide. Then she cried.
Her tears soaked her pillow that night for an hour
or two. She didn't know.
She wondered what his thoughts were
as he bled out his wrists.
Did he think of her?
How mean she was?
How horridly she treated him?
It's all connected.
She gets it now.
She never knew until now,
but that boy...
She loved him.
Privately, she didn't want to admit it.
Another night, it's raining once more.
She kneels by his grave, crying.
Knowing she helped him die.
She brought a razor with her.
She didn't know what else to do, causing a death.
She should be killed for it by noone else but herself.
She slit her wrists and bled.
She lay upon his grave.
She cried and with her last breath before
her life ended.
She wept the words, "I love you. I'm sorry."
She was buried, at her letter's request.
The letter she wrote and left that night.
At the request of the letter, she was buried
next to him. Right by the one she
loved.
They were buried, side by side
The ones who committed suicide,
over love and eachother
they both leave the world.
- by Uta No Shi |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/25/2008 |
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Comments (7 Comments)
- fumeiyona - 07/09/2011
- *speechless* Demigem You totally rocked this!
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- WorIds - 06/08/2009
- omfg i love it i'm giving it 10000000/5 and i'm favoriting it.....well...5/5 since i cnt go up that high but u get the point
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- Demigem - 03/14/2009
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Okay, Uta.
You know you stole that from my blog. =D
Thanks for submitting it for me. <3 - Report As Spam
- ImagineYourself - 02/13/2009
- its so good... you could even use this as a song or something... i would definately listen to it... favorite
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- prettycaity2 - 12/04/2008
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It made my eyes tear up Lol.
Favorite <(*_^)> - Report As Spam
- Ms Make Me Smile - 11/16/2008
- usuallly when people say a really good suicide poem its not but this was it was brillant beatiful and painful in a good way as much as pain can be a good thing.i am so favouriting
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- Demon Natsiki - 07/28/2008
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i really like this peom it is sad and sweet
yah first - Report As Spam