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Fire's Strife, Passion's Flame,
Fear yearning Ancient's name.
Tame thy heart, cut thy strings,
Fallen Angel, heart in Wings.
Once to Heed Sweet Madness's Call,
Now into your arms I Fall.
Between Life's Fire, and Cold Night's Stars,
Rests the Peace, that is now ours.
From Dusk 'till Dawn, In Moonlight's Blare,
One bathed Silver, and Sunlight's Care.
Pause the Hunter, No Fear the Prey,
At long last, the Hounds cease to Bay.
- by Krepta Copzilla |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/08/2008 |
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- Title: Worlds Apart
- Artist: Krepta Copzilla
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Description:
Now, I'm not one between Vampire and Slayer romances, but I have to say Artemis and Christopher make an adorable couple, and so, here's a poem for them. XD
I suspect only the authors will ever know the true meaning. - Date: 10/08/2008
- Tags: fire angel vampire slayer love
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Larka-love - 01/19/2009
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Guys ma not understand the art that u have put forth on here so dont listen to them they dont know what there saying lol
I didnt get in in the beginng but you just got to keep moving forward lol I that it was speactcular sorry I cant really spell
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- StrawberryMangoIceCream - 10/10/2008
- woaw. so cool,i spelled wow wrong!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ! ! ! !
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- neodapanther - 10/10/2008
- No, I don't quite understand the meaning, but you have excellent rhythm... the words and the lines, they all just floooow. Flow I say! 4/5.
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- Toastbusters - 10/09/2008
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Edit edit EDIT.
This needs a severe re-drafting. It absolutely reeks of the horrid stench of Rough Draft = Good Copy.
Process work will save your wandering rhythm - it might even fix your sickly word. Don't ever be happy with your work until it's no longer yours. This piece demands care. - Report As Spam
- Krepta Copzilla - 10/09/2008
- Indeed, that's about it. :3 Thank you.
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- MotherNature15 - 10/09/2008
- It is so beautiful. The flow was magnificant and I think it is well thought out. I think I understand, tell me if I'm wrong. But it's saying that though two things are very different, it is still possible for love and friendship to be shared between them. That is probably wrong, but that's the impression I get. smile
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- mexicantacos2003 - 10/09/2008
- i guess it was okay. maybe its because i dont know what your talkin about. i should keep my mouth shut.
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