Freedom

• Artist: -Freewings Soar-
• Description: Can anyone help me remember how to spread my wings and stand out as myself and not what anyone made me
• Date: 11/17/2008
• Tags: freedom caged love sadness

Freedom is living and dieing how you want

There are few who are free on out spread wings

and the rest of us who are chained to the ground in a cage

those few who are free life is simple

you make choices and you dont look back

the rest of us are paceing around our cage wishing

wishing we could remember how to fly

we are all born with wings we just have to remember

remember how to fly how to spread our wings

to spread out wings and catch the wind

can anyone help me remember

help me remember how to fly

Comments

[Kristy1358]

thats so cool!

[ElementalDragonBlue]

This poem reminds me how I can feel so trapped but at the end of this their is a light and it called freedom. Thank you for the comment on my poems.

[emeraldpuppy9]

that was awesome =]

[Newtie_007]

That was great! I hope that in the end I will be free but right now I'm caged like you!=( 5/5

[Aya-Whitewater]

thats good and thanks for the feed. please others if u like this read my tribute to wolves. oh and so good 5/5 great

[angelic nightmares1223]

wow this is really good. thanks for commenting on mine ^^. i think i forgot how to fly once, but my friend taught me how to again. He told me to stay true to myself and even though your still in the cage you won't ever forget.