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adrift
flailing about
i wallow in an ever deepening hole of my own self-worthlessness
drowning in a sea of failure,
i see a ray of hope
only to quash it and snuff out my tiny salvation
someone throws a lifeline, but it's too late,
I've already succumbed
flailing
falling
sinking
wandering life
crushing ambition
hopeless adoration
find me
save me
kill me
anger wells, threatening to consume me
i fight it to no avail, consuming me
turning me into myself
pulling out my hate, my fear, my life
twisting me
eating me
killing me
burning me
i feel it rotting me from within
but i can't
help feel that
i need it there
corrupting me
killing me
from the inside out
- by devious culprit |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/31/2009 |
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- Title: Stream of conciousness
- Artist: devious culprit
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Description:
kind of emo, oh well
description of the direction my life is going
different feelings, whatever
i like it - Date: 01/31/2009
- Tags: stream conciousness
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Comments (7 Comments)
- superaku - 11/13/2009
- Check out some of my stuff tho if you want to... comment and rate please.
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- superaku - 11/13/2009
- wow. your life sucks outrageously.... and church robbery needs to chill a little bit because no one really understands how you feel but you,k?! so for anyone to come at you like that is wrong..
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- Usaji-san - 03/14/2009
- Lol, sorry, just what I thought. xD
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- Roboticyouth - 02/01/2009
- do better, or die.
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- devious culprit - 01/31/2009
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wow, you're a d**k
at least you're honest - Report As Spam
- Church Robbery - 01/31/2009
- It's horrid. It's pathetic. It lacks original thought. It doesn't flow. The word choice is poor. The message is about as deep as a spoon full of water.
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- devious culprit - 01/31/2009
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yeah, but i don't usually show it like this
and i don't usually write poetry...i'm just really freaking bored
it took me like five minutes to do that - Report As Spam