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emo
It started on a tuesday,
the first day of class.
He didn't know her,
she didn't know him.
But out of the crowd, her beauty shone.
Like a pulchritudinous rose in a field of carnations.
And then, he knew he had found the one
that made his heart sing loving songs.
then, it began..
Every other day he would stare
at her stunning beauty and long dark hair,
her kissable lips, her gorgeous eyes
admirable, wonderful, radiant, rare.
"Romantic" knew and he was sure
he was in love with this girl so pure.
But he didn't know what to do or how to show
that he was in love with her wondrous glow.
So, every time, he just sat and stared.
If only she'd look, then she'd know he cared.
She'd see through his eyes his loving intent,
to spend life with her from now 'til the end.
Now..
After all the drama and sympathetic lines,
I just want to say a few simple rhymes.
They come from inside my hopeful heart
to you, my love. So listen and I'll start.
ehem..
I am "The Romantic", you've captured my heart.
I am your Romantic, your "Jack of Hearts".
If you happen to read this, though I doubt you'll do,
know that I care and, I LOVE YOU..
-Elijah Paolo E. Catingub
- by Bold Scars |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 02/08/2009 |
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Comments (7 Comments)
- lovesoua - 08/24/2009
- nice one...........its that u fall in love with someone? let her know that u love her O_o
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- chidorilash - 02/12/2009
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Pretty nice o.o
I love the last stanza most of all >.< - Report As Spam
- adek_wolf - 02/10/2009
- it's alot better than the other entry, just by changing the last few lines, you can change the way you touch people's hearts. smile amazing.wish i could give you a seven but it won't let me go that high...(lol)
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- MIDORI-chan1993 - 02/10/2009
- That's speaks to me in so many ways
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- Bold Scars - 02/09/2009
- *i mean when i submitted the other one..**
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- Bold Scars - 02/09/2009
- guys sorry for the double.. when i submitted this, Internet Explorer had a bug so i thought it wasn't submitted.. oh man.. thanks anyway,, just vote the one that you think is better.. =)
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- Holy Blades of heaven - 02/08/2009
- Ow, ur mkin me cry...
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