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Time stretches on and on
It's been so long.
Time stretches on and on...
Where have you been?
What's taken so long?
I feel like inside I should be in pain.
Yet my heart feels like a void.
So empty and plain.
Where has the beat gone to?
Why can't I feel it anymore?
Am I dead inside?
Or is this the way I was born?
Was I never supposed to feel the emotion.
This forbidden love that causes commotion.
Have my past actions finally caught up with me?
The real reason why I should be in agony.
Or is it because no one shares their feelings?
The reason why loneliness was so appealing.
I was always so content with living by myself.
Yet when we met I couldn't think about anything else.
How could I live with myself from then on?
When my heart always seemed to be beat like a gong.
Together we made everything seem like a party.
We could talk about anything whether it was clean or naughty.
Even in darkness we could make each other laugh.
Nothing was ever going to keep us back.
Yet now your gone, but hopefully only for a while.
Every second I wait for you is worth it because I know I'll pass this trial.
I'll wait in the back lying against the wall.
Just waiting for my heart to beat like a gong.
Until then
Time stretches on and on...
- Title: Time stretches on and on...
- Artist: KingBet
- Description: When I wrote this poem I intended for the flow to be slow. So when you read it try to pause at every break. If you do that I'm sure you'll get the full effect. Also I wrote this poem to be somewhere in a grey area between happiness and sadness. I hope you enjoy the poem, and please comment ^.^
- Date: 07/02/2010
- Tags: time stretches kingbet sadness happiness
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Comments (7 Comments)
- iiPanduhsaur - 07/03/2010
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surprised u write poems king? no wonder u get ladies XD lol lol lol
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- KingBet - 07/03/2010
- Wow that's a very true comment. It seems to work both ways. I'm kind of surprised it turned out that way though. lol. Ty a ton for the comment wink
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- Celestia25 - 07/03/2010
- I really like it ^^ you've written it in a way that most can connect to it at some level...but just a sort of constructive criticism - certain things could have been put in a better way, like the heart comparison or the part about you being able to talk about everything. Overall a really good piece, keep it up! ^^
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- BubbleyewStar - 07/03/2010
- Wow its really good!! I love it~
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- cutepoops - 07/02/2010
- OMFG Love it, love you, love your work.
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- Jello The Killjoy - 07/02/2010
- I love it! Its amazing.. but sad
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- Blue Zircon Butterfly - 07/02/2010
- I really like this poem it's like reflecting on me on what i've been doing these days so 'ill give you 5/5
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