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Pitter patter, pitter patter
Tumbling down my window pane
Slowly sliding down again
Pitter patter, pitter patter
Fish are sleeping, all in bed
Dancing lazily in my head
Pitter patter, pitter patter
Red as apples, dark as death.
Sliding down the horror sheath.
Pitter patter, pitter patter
Lifeless doll of human bones,
Can you hear the raining drones?
Pitter patter, pitter patter
Dripping slowly from the blade
Smiling crooked never fade
Pitter patter, pitter patter
- Title: Blood Rain
- Artist: supi_kun
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Description:
This poem was done for a contest entry at school, but my teacher wouldn't let me submit it because she said that the poem is to... horrific. She also said that if she didn't know me, she would've sent me to the counseling office. oh noe~
I wasn't aiming to be scary like that, but it just came out. Please comment? - Date: 07/19/2008
- Tags: macabre horrow corpse rain dream
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Comments (5 Comments)
- supi_kun - 07/20/2008
- thank you demented crow~
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- demented_crow - 07/20/2008
- very nice. i liked it alot.
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- supi_kun - 07/19/2008
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aw~
thanks firefang~! - Report As Spam
- NefariousShark - 07/19/2008
- This poem is absolutly amazing. I could see where i was in other words the setting was very clear. 5/5
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