the significance of death

• Artist: CrowleysGirl
• Description: i wrote this when i was mad at the world.....i guess that's just how i write
• Date: 10/17/2008
• Tags: significance death

death poem

i hear my heart beating waiting for it to stop,

the time when all the temperature in my body is going to drop

when all the blood stops rushing through my veins

so that only the shell of myself remains

when my eyes will look but can not see

the corpse remains but is not me

when my breathing finally dies away

the time when no one can make me stay

the time when i take my final breath

then i will lie peacefully in death.

Comments

[xOathkeeper_and_Oblivionx]

not like you at all, but i enjoyed it. nice work

[XxTsukiyomixX]

OMG i love it and your better than me in poetry

[Petty Spaghetti]

T-T that made me want to cry alittle... but other than that i loved it! 10/10