So There's this Boy I like.

• Artist: 1-800-REPTAR
• Description: A poem written in small intervals. This boy in general is somewhat of an imaginary creature that lay inside the speakers mind. Almost as if they're in a dreaming-in-reality sort of state.
  I personally think it's a love it or hate it kind of poem.
  
  ..Either way, tell me what you think. ^^;
• Date: 11/26/2008
• Tags: theres like

So there's this boy I like.


His hair is blue and black
Eyes which never lack
Pigment with pretty green and brown
Such a pretty little thing he is
Oh how he is so kind
It warms my heart to hear him speak
My little toy unwinds.

So there's this boy I like.
Blue locks black locks.
Thick wires line his eyes.
If moon be pale,
He is paler than moonlight.
So there's this boy I like.

His name is Mile.
Millennium with the lipstick lips.
The lipstick lips I love to kiss.
So warm so soft I love my boy.
My boy, my boy, my little boy toy.

Comments

[Hoshikaze]

you have a lot of potential in you! there are parts of this poem that feel a little rough, but there are also MANY lines that are pure awesome. ^_^ keep writing!

[XxX_BaconHawk_XxX]

It made me think of the one I love.I though it was great. smile

[MyThiCal_iiLluSiOn]

actually i liked it for once one of these poems were pimp some i see everywhere
stolen from websites . . people are stupid but this was awesome =]

[ais_18]

nice description

[PrincessAnmi]

wow...nice

[Dwiinkiin Kitsune]

500000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000/5, if i could

[FormerlyKitaTataki]

I feel kinda out of place here. I really liked how you described him and showed your passion for the boy, but.... it doesn't really tell anything. Unless, of course, that's what you intended it to be. I'm thinkin 3/5. Please don't hurt me.