My First Song Lyrics

• Artist: Xxlove_lasts_foreverxX
• Description: Well i always make lyrics and all so heres my first song i ever wrote about a girl i liked........so i hope you like it and remember this was only the first so please know that it won't be really good...and Thank You a bunch for reading... ^_^ oh lastly its not too long because it was my first and i didn't know how long songs were supposed to be =c
• Date: 11/28/2008
• Tags: song

The girl that i love.Is somewhere above.I can see her in my mind.I'm always on her side.I'll chase her like darkness on light.She's my dream.There's a lot she means.I love her more than anything!She's more than everything.With the end of world.I know with that girl.I'll make it out alive!She's my whole life...

Comments

[icygirl357]

Yes! write another song! xD

[Flippa_Got_Swaag]

I really love it. It's touching.. 5/5 smile

[o0-Chibi-San-0o]

I like it, even though it's kind of short, I like it. ^^
I say this as a fellow song writer.

[lover_boi9]

honestly you tried to make the song sound to good
but it was good 4/5

[P-A-N-D-A-C-H-E-E-E]

wow i love your song

[Xxlove_lasts_foreverxX]

thanks everyone and idk wat ur sayin tho pinay o_o

[PHiLiP33NAY]

Oregon logger, you need to calm down. I'm not a fxckin' hater, he's my friend. And, hopefully, making corrections will cause improvements.