Oh. Heartbreaker

• Artist: oh deer lord
• Description: Well. I Wrote This For All Those People Who Get Their Hearts Broken By Those Heart Breakers. Vote Please. This Is My First Time Ever Submitting Anything.
• Date: 12/23/2008
• Tags: heartbreaker

Dear Heart breaker,


I thought we were meant
but life can be wrong.
I thought that I loved you
the thing is, I guess I'm always wrong
because really and truly,
there are so many other things
I can care about more than you

You try to break me,
try to make me cry, and need you,
but in the end, that is NOTHING!
You know why? becauseI'm letting go,
and I'm taking everything out of here
and I'm leaving where no one and nothing can get to me

You say I'm fake when you know it's not true.
So now I'm guessing that
it's you -the one who lies and cheats-
but always gets beat
I guess,
you'll never know what
you're missing out on.
It's bye forever and we
totally will never live on.

Sincerely, Heartbroken

Comments

[evil_azn729]

i likes it, its a good poem

[CosmicSweetss]

It's nice but it would be better with structure. I understand there are things such as "free prose" but the way to break things up require structure. It also seems to be missing something, not sure what.

[shini2188]

yay first comment(^*.*^)XD its good