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The Kiss
ⓒ2008 Noah Vale
The kiss that you gave me
With lips soft and sweet
Gave birth to a shiver
From my head to my feet
The look in your eyes
Shook me to my core
I kissed you again
But that made me want more
So I held you to me
And I stole one more kiss
But I couldn’t stop there
You'd shown my heart bliss
I wanted another
Or maybe even two
In fact, I didn’t want to
Stop kissing you
I doubt that I could've
It felt so right
Lying there kissing
Deep into the night
Now its the morning
You’re soundly asleep
But the sight of your lips
Still makes my heart leap
I leave a kiss on your cheek
As soft as a dove
Until you awaken
My beauty, my love
- by duir ancient |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/29/2008 |
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- Title: The Kiss
- Artist: duir ancient
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Description:
This poem was inspired both by a past experience and a desire for the future. It's the only love poem I've ever written, one of the few cheerful poems I've ever been capable of, and, thank goodness, it's copyrighted lol. If you feel like printing it and giving it to someone that means a lot to you, feel free, but do me a favor and leave my name on it. Oh, and vote on it... if you like it, then say so. Pweese?
- Date: 12/29/2008
- Tags: kiss love
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Absynia - 12/31/2008
- O_O wow... *blink* just... wow...
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- Baby-Moon-Kitty - 12/31/2008
- Patch,I love it. Its a really Great poem. Even though I know who inspired u. Keep up the great work. I hope to see u back home soon. Love always, Moon
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- Onyx Nightingale - 12/31/2008
- Really nice work.
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- Typo Negativ - 12/30/2008
- Nice work, Patch. I'm impressed. smile 5/5
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- Xx_Vor_xX - 12/29/2008
- Hmm man you scare me, and i know you in real, this is really upbeat for you, easily a great poem
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- Doom Skater911 - 12/29/2008
- amazing!
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- OMG its jessiebaby - 12/29/2008
- i can't belive how amazing you are
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