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I'm young and unashamed of what I do
Of this better named Junior you never knew
I wish I can get a ride into space
And journey to a new place
Where they're is no struggle between another race
I'll pack my bags and leave today
It's like I write everything in pain
Cause they claim everything I can't acclaim
It makes a brother want to go insane
But I'm still the same
Destruction of Earth will come soon
All my fellow enemies will meet there dooms
A hostile takeover, a world domination
Ending the life of human procrastination
And everybody will receive justification
And that'll be enough to cease the hatred
The industry is weak, we have all power
Destroy the empire's tower
Slay the king and queen of this monarchy
And crumble the remains of their hierarchy
Then replace it with a new system
A system in which we won't be forced to listen
Listen Up! We got more work to do
If we want to have a start of something knew
Layout out the blueprints, the designs are well made
Implement the influences, Lupe and Kanye
Do you think we can keep a promise?
And act like it never started
It's so clear in a dream
There's much more than what it seems
It may actually happen, you need to believe
Sadness only follows with grief
Happily faces with a mix of excitement
Should only encourage us to take flight
Yes sir, I'm the bright star in the picture
That you showed me when I was a little younger
Now I'm far away, I'm all the way up here
In a distant planet past the atmosphere
Guess again, I'm out of your sphere influence
And created my own influence
Oh so prudent, and a little more intriguing
I am a legend that you should all want to be seeing
- Title: A New Chapter
- Artist: lilandrez
- Description: My 6th Rhyme. I don't know about you guys, but, there was some stuff I put in here that I didn't think I can do. I never knew I could thyme this well. It was really surprising.
- Date: 04/13/2009
- Tags: chapter junior lilandrez music rhyme
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Zitenshi - 08/21/2009
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CHEEKYANGEL -RP-
T is close to R... the "thyme" thing is just a typo xd
An continuing to the comment... this poem is pretty good!
a really deep feeling in it surprised ha, but good thing is that there is no END OF THE WORLD (AND HUMANITY) coz its just an END OF CYCLE!! we are next to the 5th cycle! so yay...
maybe some people die...
but mankind will survive! (Oh... that rhymed!!)
(((I'D LOVE TO GIVE THIS A 5 BUT, OH WELL))
well, btw, wana check my poem? http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writin - Report As Spam
- makayla_girl995 - 07/22/2009
- okay i like this song
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- INtoXiCAteD RosE - 07/08/2009
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I have a feeling you plagerized...Because the words and rhymes are put together very well and qoute
"I never knew I could thyme this well. It was really surprising."
you cant even spell rhyme right -.-;;;
Thats just my opinion..I dont know about you guys.
Good luck -sigh- - Report As Spam
- Elizabeth Nara - 07/04/2009
- incredible down to the last word, full of emotions that only come at times, u have drawn them out, 5/5
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- AF0rbid3n L 0 v 3 - 06/28/2009
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It has a nice beat and clear message. The emotion is there and in your face.
I like it. 5/5
And it's not always about the rhyming. It's the message and heart you put into it that's so clear that will lead you far.
The rhyming's just a bonus. ;]]] <3333333 - Report As Spam
- lu_larue - 06/20/2009
- 5/5. nice. its rhythmic. read mine too.
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- Alibis of the Heart - 06/15/2009
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Wow, this is good!
5/5 - Report As Spam