My poor friend Aimee

• Artist: sexy-RAWRZ-ya
• Description: it's a poem about my friend who I worry about even though she doesn't know that I know she still cuts herself whenever she gets the chance.plz comment and rate I would really like to know how good or bad you think it is and how I could improve
• Date: 06/04/2009
• Tags: poor friend aimee

Your tears slip by unnoticed by most of your friends
but i have noticed and it hurts me to see
you suffer like this.
Please,I beg this isn't how it ends.
I watch as droplet by droplet falls off your hand
and hit the floor
as you whisper,
"I wish I was no more."
My eyes fill to the brim with rain
because you think this is your only way
to stay sane.
I try to tell you that it's not the only way
but you won't listen to me...
so I cry for you crying
because I know there's nothing left that anyone can say.
She won't listen,
not to me,not to Travis...no one.
She just cries alone and screams inside,
watching her blood glisten.
What more can I do
to help you ?
I see inside,
the girl fighting with her might who wants help,
but you keep her down with a razor's kiss on your wrist.
I failed to help you...
and I'm sorry for that...
I tried...
but in the end tring won't be enough. crying
I just miss the girl who used to laugh. crying

Comments

[XxBrokenAngel22xX]

i think it was a pretty good poem, powerful and meaningful, it definetly shows that your hurting for your friend. Im sorry to hear that your friend is doing this sad i wish the best for you both and your friendship.