Dreamer

• Artist: Milotic_Forever
• Description: A poem about what if our dreams came true.
• Date: 07/15/2008
• Tags: dreams

The land of dreams is full of deception,
Life, Love,
Is all within our dreams,
But will you loose yourself in them?

I dreamt of you,
Hoping, Praying,
That I will meet you in real life,
Is it true that I have fallen for a dream?

I had lost myself in those dreams,
Reality, Dreams;
I couldn’t tell the difference,
Was my life a dream or not?

I finally met my dream as I saw,
Night, Day,
If my dreams have come true,
Would it mean my nightmares would too?

Within my dreams evil came too,
Death, Sorrow;
If those nightmares come true,
Will I be the one to die?

Comments

[Atheshya]

Interesting concept, though it could have been done better. Maybe some more imagery or something? Again, I love this concept (The line 'If my dreams have come true,
Would it mean my nightmares would too?
' interests me), but... Three stars.

[II_The Cookie Monster_II]

thats a real good peom